The prevention of health problems and health illness is more important than treatment and medicine. Government funding should reflect this. To what extent do you agree.
precaution is better than cure. Nowadays, most of the diseases are spread due to unhealthy lifestyle and lack of hygienic awareness. Some experts have an opinion that if the government do some prevention scheme planning and fund it adequately than It is possible to avoid many diseases.
First of all, Today, getting treatment for any diseases is not a cup of tea, especially of lower and middle-class families. You should have too much money to pay hefty bills of hospital and medicines and be ready to endure pain while curring. Additionally, uncured diseases like cancer or diabetes can put you and your loved ones in the pathetic situation. Moreover, If you will consume a large number of medicines then it will damage your internal immune system which is responsible to resist virus and infections bacterias. by this way, curing the diseases is a very costly deal and avoid if possible.
on other hand, lots of diseases are spreading due to unhealthy foods and contaminated drinking water supply. The government should focus on to provide healthy food and better infrastructure for pure drinking water supply. Apart from that, Government can lunch the vaccine program widely for the children and teenagers which can help to remove the foundation of the diseases. For instance, WHO declared that India is polio-free countries because of its extraordinary vaccine programs. Government should allocate its budget wisely in order to prevention of health issues.
To sum up, I totally agree with the idea to focus on prevention of the diseases. As it is quite easy and handy compare to the suffering from diseases.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, then, while, apart from, for instance, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10526315789 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77409986348 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62030075188 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3314562594 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5333333333 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7333333333 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159444457893 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468661168416 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547707492615 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0803255074475 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357652380965 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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