It is an obvious truth that preventing disease is much more important than treatment and our government is responsible for that and a remarkable budget must be spend on the informing people and sanitation which are two significant factors on preventing different kinds of diseases. This essay deals with arguments for and against this controversial topic.
On the one hand, there are a majority number of people who are in favor of preventing for numerous reasons. First and foremost, prevention needs less money in comparison to treatment that can lead to being more economic and beneficent.
Secondly, by devoting more money on sanitation people can enjoy more from their healthiness and can improve life expectancy which going to have a crucial effect on society and and can increase self_confidence of folks. thirdly, we shall have a healthy generation in the future.
On the other hand, others are totally oppose to spending more budget on prevention and they reckon, having people who are suffering from special diseases under treatment seems more important rather than anything else. One drawback associated with that, is remaining low amount of money for medication in case of putting more money on prevention. So, they highly think it is better to be worry about sick people who are dealing whit a tough situation.
At last, there are different ideas about both usefulness and uselessness of preventing. Some folk advocate, while others disadvocate this idea. However, it may have some negative points in a short time, I absolutely believe it will have a lot of advantages in the future. So, I tend to agree with people who are for prevention because it makes more sense to me.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08960573477 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77644319888 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5770609319 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.3378478636 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.230769231 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147080719158 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050147416509 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491080856416 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0874888157013 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473111380221 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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