Dear Mr. Smith,
While I greatly appreciate your trying in keeping everything clean and organized, a few problems have come to the apartment that need your immediate attention in order to be addressed.
I would appreciate it if you could take care of these issues as soon as possible because they are so vital and related to health
The first problem is that the carpet on the stairs is ripping apart and it can be very dangerous for residents.
The second problem is that some of the elevators lights have gone out and are not working any more. It seems some steps must be taken before everything get worst.
Please let me thank you again for your kindness and being so responsible. Please do not hesitate to let me know if you need clarification of any of these issues by giving me a call at 555-44444.
Yours Sincerely,
F. BAGHERI
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 28, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...esidents. The second problem is that some of the elevators lights have gone out and are ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 139, Rule ID: OF_ANY_OF[1]
Message: Consider simply using 'of' instead.
Suggestion: of
...o let me know if you need clarification of any of these issues by giving me a call at 555...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 708.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 150.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54222999222 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.673333333333 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.7921278543 44.8134815571 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.142857143 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142440451832 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664126303648 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384561776789 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0721721533503 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340779828551 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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