It is an obvious truth that smoking is extremely harmful for the health of body and people select smoking by themselves consciously, in spite of being so harmful and hazardous. So, some people strongly believe that smoker folk should expenses more for having medical treatments in comparison to people who do not smoke. This essay deals with arguments for and against this controversial topic.
On the one hand, it is duty of government to provide equal treatment facilities for every one apart from being smoker or not.
Actually, people must be treated as humans and their right must be considered anyway. In addition, not only, they must not pay more but more amount of money should be spent on these kind of people in order to get them familiar with the dangerous effect of any smoking on their healthy. Therefore, it appears that smoking people should be cared even more.
On the other hand, people who are opposed to smoking strongly believe that people must pay more money when they go to physicians because of making themselves sick by their hand. The other crucial reason that inclined them to be favor of paying more is because of thinking that by this way they not going to have more money in order to be spend on purchasing cigarette or any other kind of smoking. However, it dose not make sense, it becomes sometimes practical by encouraging them to stop smoking.
In conclusion, there are different ideas about this matter. I prefer to be agreed with people who are for supporting smokers by regarding them respected and having the same rules for them like others. If they are not cared enough they might be even worse, that does not seem a good idea.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 176, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...more amount of money should be spent on these kind of people in order to get them familiar...
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Line 6, column 411, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'doses'?
Suggestion: doses
... any other kind of smoking. However, it dose not make sense, it becomes sometimes pr...
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Line 6, column 435, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put before the verb 'becomes'.
Suggestion: sometimes becomes
...ng. However, it dose not make sense, it becomes sometimes practical by encouraging them to stop s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, anyway, but, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, apart from, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76632302405 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39540839219 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536082474227 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2472830857 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.692307692 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8461538462 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176340919441 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692242335991 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551360090711 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104916385715 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504315844727 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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