some people think that all University students should study whatever they like others believe that they should only be allowed to study subject that will be useful in future such as those related to the Science and Technology discuss both views and give your opinion.
University education plays a vital role in student career. Some people have an opinion that universities should offer only the career-oriented subject such as Science and Technology whereas, others said the student should have the authority to select the subject which subjects they want to study. Both views are correct. I will discuss it in the following paragraph.
Technical courses have a better job market than any other courses. Today, Government and Organisation have raised investment in technology and infrastructure sector which not only increase the demand of doctor, engineers and scientist but give the guarantee of employment after graduation. For example, the government recently launched Mission Mars has generated almost 100000 jobs directly or indirectly. Not only jobs assurity, Science and Technology stream students are essential for the growth of the country. Usually, the major invention which had changed the world was from the Science and Technology field. So, it is necessary to maintain the influx of technology and science students in society.
On other hand, offering free choice of subjects are helped in intellectual development. There is enough evidence to prove that one can perform well in academic if he is not forced to study a particular subject. For example, the students who are interested in Arts and Music will fail in science subject if they're compelled to do so. Moreover, some non-technical subject such as philosophy and history is indispensable for social reform. History represent our culture and traditions while psychology helps us to understand citizen behaviour and mood. so it will be a big loss for society if University stops to teach such subjects.
in conclusion, all the Science and Technology subjects are beneficial in terms of the labour market and country growth, other subjects are like arts, music and philosophy cannot be removed from the education system.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3940397351 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8835508624 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605960264901 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.7465967504 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8235294118 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7647058824 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.70588235294 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337679506827 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881599350447 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690269582277 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19473495492 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0861134035301 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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