The prevention of health problems and health illness is more important than treatment and medicine. Government funding should reflect this. To what extent do you agree.
precaution is better than cure. Nowadays, most of the diseases are spreading due to unhealthy lifestyle and lack of hygienic awareness. Some experts have an opinion that if the government launch prevention scheme and fund it adequately than It is possible to avoid many diseases. I will discuss some points regarding it in the following paragraphs.
First of all, Today, getting treatment for any diseases is not a cup of tea, especially of lower and middle-class families. You should have too much money to pay hefty bills of hospital and medicines and be ready to endure pain while curring. Additionally, uncured diseases like cancer or diabetes can put you and your loved ones in the pathetic situation. Moreover, If you will consume a large number of medicines then it will damage your internal immune system which is responsible to resist virus and infections bacterias. by this way, curing the diseases is a very costly deal and avoid if possible.
on other hand, lots of diseases are spreading due to unhealthy foods and contaminated drinking water supply. The government should focus on to provide healthy food and better infrastructure for pure drinking water supply. Apart from that, Government can lunch the vaccine program widely for the children and teenagers which can help to remove the foundation of the diseases. For instance, WHO declared that India is polio-free countries because of its extraordinary vaccine programs. The government should allocate its budget wisely in order to the prevention of health issues.
To sum up, I totally agree with the idea to focus on the prevention of the diseases. As it is quite easy and handy compare to the suffering from diseases.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, while, apart from, for instance, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11510791367 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79312782846 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604316546763 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3107996752 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.875 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147074717172 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0429395301254 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526377237763 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0730534354659 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289888061701 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.