Public celeberations (such as national days, festivals etc) are held in most countries. These are often quite expensive and some people say that governments should spend money on more useful things.
Do you agree or disagree?
The public days and collective celebrations are integral days for celebrating national pride, rich culture as well as days of reuniting in an occupied life. I totally disagree, with this viewpoint that national days or ceremonies are economic expenditure of the country and these funds could be utilised in other productive activities.
To begin with, in contemporary times, particularly in these days people praise their martyrs or freedom fighters who are national pride and remind the country's importance as well as cultural values from their hectic lifestyle. For example, in India such as republic day, independence day and Gandhi Jayanti are the days where Indians pay their tribute to their dignitaries who fought or sacrificed their lives for the nation. Moreover, the days of national importance might be lessons for the young generation where they get to know about their freedom struggle and ideologies of national heroes. These days are vitally important for national significance and young brains can learn about their culture and national values.
Secondly, the cultural days could be important to organise the reunions and community gatherings. Since, nowadays, most of the individuals do not have enough time for meeting their loved ones. Although, people try to manage some time on this special occasion to meet with their families or friends. However, these festive days could generate income or boost the economy of the country. According to business statistics on festivals like Christmas, Diwali and Eid the economy shows dramatic rise, which is beneficial for the nation's economy. Thus, the community days may be helpful to organise the social gatherings during sedentary lifestyle and assist the livelihood of the people.
Overall, it seems advisable that public days are paramount for the enlightenment of the children about their great history. In addition, it is a medium of sharing beautiful moments with society as well as an economic boost for the nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 525, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...matic rise, which is beneficial for the nations economy. Thus, the community days may b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, in addition, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37060702875 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7127930795 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568690095847 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3727529861 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.071428571 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171453697169 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681819571878 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0287463832222 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110067418831 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316060622846 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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