Older people usually think that life used to be better in the past. Do you think they are right or wrong to think like that?
Every era has its own positive and negative outcomes. Elderly people believe that life in their time was more advantageous. In my opinion, advancement of technology and a well-defined system of law makes this modern period a golden phase for humanity.
To begin with, modern technology has given numerous benefits to the people and it is more productive than the older period. The dramatic growth in automation assists to provide employment in various fields rather than people in the past were mainly dependable on agriculture for the livelihood. In other words, there are a number of opportunities to explore different corners of the globe which could not be possible in the past. Moreover, the lack of communication was also a factor to maintain the relationships between family and friends. Nowadays the communication gap is minimized with the help of the internet, where people from different nations could connect with each other through social applications.
Especially the significant change which has come from the old period to the modern period that is a stronger legal system. The well-organised system of law and treaties is administering peace and harmony between the countries. Consequently, the treaties force the nations to conduct peaceful trade and most importantly strict laws restrain catastrophic wars which have often happened in the past between the countries. For example, history has faced two big world wars which took a lot of lives of people whereas, in modern age these types of wars have not happened since after the establishment of the United Nations organization which is the governing body of these treaties.
Overall, it seems advisable that fruitful results of technology and the justice system of this period be able to give happiness to the people. While people in the previous period had faced ample problems regarding unemployment, communication gulf as well as colossal war fares.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, whereas, while, for example, as well as, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 12.0 32.9175257732 36% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 26.3917525773 186% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 937.175257732 174% => OK
No of words: 307.0 206.0 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31270358306 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 3.78020617076 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94365237159 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 127.690721649 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583061889251 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 509.4 290.88556701 175% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.0853588046 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.5 76.5299724578 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9285714286 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 4.34317383033 230% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0734697080511 0.216113520407 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0265859579532 0.0766984524023 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0257954830667 0.0603063233224 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0443988184385 0.12726935374 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022307023901 0.0580467560999 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 8.37731958763 173% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 70.7449484536 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 7.45979381443 170% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 8.71597938144 155% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 41.2886597938 203% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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