Question: People are now living longer. In fact, in many countries, the average age is now reaching 80 years. What are the advantages and disadvantages in a society where people are living longer?
In my own observation, society is now quite conscious on how to keep life lasting longer. However, there are few pros and cons of why some people in other countries live longer.
First, I would like to share two advantages, such as a better economy and healthy living environment.
Foreign countries like the USA, some parts of Europe like Paris and Japan, their economic status provided a lot of opportunities to have a better career that could help people to have money and buy stuff to maintain their well being. The other one is how they maintain the quality of their environment safely and have healthy practices for them to enjoy life. They have clean water to use for food consumption, washing and cleaning, less air pollution as they have good management on how to control waste and well controlled crime incidents. I believe that these components are a major contribution of why their people live longer. When people's feelings are being secured and safe, it promotes and provides comforts and motivations to keep going.
Lastly , there are disadvantages that I could think about like poverty, overpopulation and lack of education which I take these views from those third countries such as Philippines, my own country. A lot of my countrymen are struggling financially which may be related to big families and lack of education. When there are so many members in one family, it's really hard to provide healthy foods on the table especially when the parents have no jobs. Poverty is the number one factor that could really cause to shorten the lifespan of most Filipinos.
To summarise, a person who lives in a country with a better lifestyle because of a good career and healthy environment will have a good life and live longer whereas if a person falls in the poverty line, he faces difficulty to strive to live a better life.
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: Did you mean 'shortening'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: shortening
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Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... will have a good life and live longer. Whereas if a person falls in poverty line has a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, lastly, may, really, so, third, well, whereas, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86173633441 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61776381225 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569131832797 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3161137948 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207210170126 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765809411828 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775086708003 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112614825407 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0881244389677 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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