Social media has become a real problem for some young people today, and government should create laws that allow only people over 18 years of age to have accounts.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Lifestyle has been changed entirely since technology has spreaded it's roots in this modern society. Presently, it is argued that nowadays, fewer youngsters are facing real problem by using social media and laws must be made by state that enables only those individuals who are over 18 years old to make accounts. Here, i would like accord with the given statement.
There are mutifarious can be put down to endorse my point of view. First and foremost, this phenomena might become more productive for them. To justify, in this age, they are mature and know what is right or wrong for their life, they may use social media only for lucrative purposes such as attend the classes over zoom, take the school's exams on lock browser application which help them to use it in a correct way. Apart from it, they not only get to know to use these applications but also they become more knowledgeable. Thus, they are expected to be more intellectual as it is said that "knowledge is invaluable power".
Further emphasizing on my point of view. Secondly, this practice helps them to use it in the direction of success. To illustrate some masses are not good at study and not prefer to persue it for their careers, they like to indulge in business by making videos on Youtube, Facebook, Instagram and many more that allow them to earn money, Thus, they are expected to be learned money management, this kind of interest make youngsters superior in the community.
They assert that such laws snatch the freedom of youth. For instance, they might loose the liberty by following these laws, they do not have any other entertainment source, feel boredom then they adore to live isolate or stay away from their guardians and involve in bad activities are consumption of alcohol, malpracticing and malfunctioning. As a result, this trend can destroy the future of youngsters.
Finally, undeniable, some handful masses believe that this practice is not better for their lives. However, it is an advisable that this phenomena is considered as boon for them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, thus, apart from, for instance, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94524495677 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70372606314 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596541786744 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 5.43587174349 294% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 92.9431950172 49.4020404114 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.25 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6875 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184345662545 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552743343269 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467389591304 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102485191823 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045343475723 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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