Some students tend to play computer games rather than do sports. Why is this? what can be done to tackle this problem?
Lifestyle has undergone dramatic changes over a couple of decades. Presently, few of pupils prefer to play computer games as compared to sports. The following paragraph will elucidate the reasons for this problem with handful remedial measures.
To commence with the reasons. First and foremost, urbanization causes students to play digital games. To justify, nowadays, people constructing building, monuments and sky scrappers by cutting plots for tourist attractions, this trend is reducing the empty space and rooms which urge them to play such games rather than sports. In addition to this, tiredness is the biggest factor to create this hazard. To illustrate, the burden of study from school and they have to study at home too, they do not have much time to indulge in outdoor activities. Thence, are expected to be followed such practice.
Moving further, Covid-19 is acknowledged the world's biggest pandemic, it forces them to stay at home. For instance, they are studying at home by surfing websites on internet and not getting the opportunity to go outside because this pandemic is very dangerous for their lives. Therefore, playing computer games might be recommended to them.
Undeniably, every has a key. To initiate with, it is the responsibility of government to control this problem. In this context, it must provide sufficient playgrounds there they can play the sports games. Apart from it, school work must be given less to pupils so that they can involve in outdoor activities and make their body fit and healthy as it is said that " Children are the pillars of nation". Last but not least, state must provide the treatment of this pandemic. As a result, it is likely to be reduced the fear in their mind to go outside.
To recapitulate, government and individuals u=must put their best foot forward together to curb this menace.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 46, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'worlds the biggest'.
Suggestion: worlds the biggest
...g further, Covid-19 is acknowledged the worlds biggest pandemic, it forces them to stay at hom...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, so, then, therefore, apart from, for instance, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13442622951 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.745458736 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616393442623 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.8754350748 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4210526316 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0526315789 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94736842105 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288440537502 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795479156935 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645009726243 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1404667838 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496683952178 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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