An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in yur region and has written asking for information and advice.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
1). offer to find somewhere to stay
2). give advice about what to do
3). give information about what clothes to bring
Dear friend,
I am writing a letter to my friend regarding he wants to spend two-weeks vacation in my region.
My friend name is Nathan Bliss. He is 22 years old. He studies Business Accounting at Northern College. Recently, he passed his second semester, he got two-weeks holidays. Actually, in my apartment building no single room available. So, i will advice him to stay at Ramada Hotel, it is one of the cheapest hotels in Canada with just $40 per night and it is located near to many attractions.
My friend will visit on on 18th of May and stay till 1st of June and i will advice visit CN Tower, it is one popular attraction ever and Toronto Eaten Centre, it is situated near to your hotel, there you can have your community food at cheapest price.
Last but not least, one more advice bring some woolen clothes, sometimes, here you will see some snow.
If you have any question. Please, contact me on my phone number any time.
Your faithfully,
Harshit Munjal,
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... building no single room available. So, i will advice him to stay at Ramada Hotel...
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...ny attractions. My friend will visit on on 18th of May and stay till 1st of June a...
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...th of May and stay till 1st of June and i will advice visit CN Tower, it is one p...
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...ay and stay till 1st of June and i will advice visit CN Tower, it is one popular attra...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...etimes, here you will see some snow. If you have any question. Please, contact ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, may, regarding, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 812.0 1615.20841683 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 174.0 315.596192385 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46521580024 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.67816091954 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 506.74238477 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 64.6947426166 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.6666666667 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179975615132 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055373790415 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718848730772 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0919986124811 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0821151336863 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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