Advances in science and technology and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as well as postponing the day we die. There is no better time to be alive than now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Lifestyle has been changed since technology has spreaded it's roots in modern society. Presently, it is argued that some people ponder that technology and science are worst for their lives. Here, i would like to discord with given statement.
Multifarious points can be putdown to endorse my point of view. First and foremost, such kind of technology not only get entertained individuals but also works as a time saver. to initiate with, they can watch television, play video games and computer games while sitting at home, they do not need to collect people or friends to play outdoor games. Thence, they can invest time in their work or business.
Further emphasizing on my point of view, such resources play a paramount role in professional lives. To give a specific example, in this panademic, during Covid-19, government issued lockdown for long period of time, people were helpless not able to work or go outside, they uses many applications such as Zoom, Skype and Google Duo to see their clients so that they can maintain their business. as a result, they earned money or pay expenses by using technology.
On the other hand, others have conflicting views, they think that science and technology are not lucrative in this scenario. These sources cause myriads of ailments. In this context, people use many devices to make food as microwave, oven, roti-maker and so forth which spoil the quality of food, such devices make food nutritiousless or fibreless that are very detrimental for their body. Consequently, they are likely to live their life with ailments.
To recapitulate, few people assert that technology and science have no role in this era. However, i still believe that such sources are very significant for the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
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Suggestion: To
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
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Suggestion: period
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'use'
Suggestion: use
...ss not able to work or go outside, they uses many applications such as Zoom, Skype a...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
... that they can maintain their business. as a result, they earned money or pay expe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, so, still, then, while, kind of, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07986111111 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68407718799 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614583333333 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.3371773122 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4375 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111491012093 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.040980755004 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458094357035 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0688264546258 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293294973209 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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