Advances in science and technology and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as well as postponing the day we die. There is no better lime to be alive than now.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Some expert says this era is Golden time for every living. Owing to the advancement of science and technology or other areas of society, in this last century lives have altered like now folks live longer than usual. There could not be a better time to live like this. I completely agree with this notion which I will elaborate with suitable illustrations in the following paragraph.
To begin with, the prominent reason for living long is automation in every aspect of life. For example,now humans have all kinds of private and public transportation for any kind of traveling, for house chores now there is machines like washing machine, dishwasher, mixture, fridge. These all devices not only reduced humans physical efforts but also saves precious time which they can utilize either to learn something new or pursue their own dream. Due to this mankind have a feeling of contentment. In addition to this, in this modern era, individuals only follow their passion rather than worry about monetary hazardous. If people have peace in mind, they can give the best output to their immediate family members as well as work better in professional life which is quite crucial for everyone. In past these was not possible, even in future gain a question mark.
If we talk about best time in earth’s history, then everyone will say that this tenure is the best time to live, because in past people used to do hard physical work not only for house odd jobs but also for their bread and butter. For example, my grandfather used to woke up at around 4 o’clock and starting his work. Because that time merely any devices was available which was abating human’s arduous task. So most of time they were swamped to finished their routine task. Secondly, why this time is better than future than in future most of all humans would be too busy to earn their livelihoods so they may be neither able to pursue their dream nor be able to spend quality time with their kith and keen. Hence, this era is perfect to live and enloy out life from each angles.
In conclusion, although in past person’s having simpler life or in future they will have all technological facilities, today’s life is well balanced with science and technological advancement. Unless you cannot have ecstatic life, you can enjoy it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , now
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Line 2, column 214, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[3]
Message: Did you mean 'there are machines'?
Suggestion: there are machines
...kind of traveling, for house chores now there is machines like washing machine, dishwasher, mixtu...
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Line 3, column 12, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'about the best'.
Suggestion: about the best
...uture gain a question mark. If we talk about best time in earth’s history, then everyone ...
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Line 3, column 318, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...around 4 o’clock and starting his work. Because that time merely any devices was availa...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... will have all technological facilities, today’s life is well balanced with scien...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1905.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 395.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82278481013 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46319616818 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574683544304 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2630674624 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.263157895 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7894736842 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15789473684 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20696969741 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673045704887 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066036904043 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14836952617 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709296008983 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.