Your friend has just moved to a new house. Write a letter to your friend and let him know about the gift that you have prepared for him/her.
In your letter, you should:
-describe the gift
-tell how it will be delivered
-explain why you chose it.
Dear Khushbu,
Many congratulations to you for new beautiful house which you purchased last month and shifted. I feel so cheerful for you, so I’ve prepared one hand made gift for you.
I’ve purchased a book lamp for you which is hand made by indegineous folks. It’s height is almost 2 feet and in white color. This is bettery supported device and flexible means you can carry where you want, even when travelling. It’s lightweight.
Well, I have thought to deliver by fast delivery option. Thus, yesterday I had enquire myriad courier service and one I found who delivers within two day. Yet, I haven’t delivered but tomorrow morning I will, after wrapping myself so that it can’t get damaged. Hense, you’ll receive on 17th July in evening.
You know why I chose this for you ? Because I know you are bibliophile person, and you were longing since long to have some unique a book lamp which can ticks you to read more. Perhaps! this is the thing which you’re longing.
Hope you will this and seen you soon.
Yours lovingly,
Rehana.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 153, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'tick'
Suggestion: tick
... have some unique a book lamp which can ticks you to read more. Perhaps! this is the ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 186, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...ch can ticks you to read more. Perhaps! this is the thing which you’re longing. Hop...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, thus, well, i feel, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 26.3917525773 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 875.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80769230769 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45268157918 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.703296703297 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0100937826 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.5 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92857142857 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322161623568 0.216113520407 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111184168594 0.0766984524023 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856753657264 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181085121282 0.12726935374 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654075734724 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.73 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.