You were doing a short course at another country. All of a sudden, you had to leave the course and fly back to your home country. Write a letter to your teacher, and in your letter
– express your gratitude
– explain why you had to leave
– explain what part of the course you enjoyed the most.
I am writing a letter to my teacher regarding i left the course and going back to my home country.
On June 24th , 2021. I landed in Canada as an immigrant for one year course as i studied Canadian Investment Funds Course (CIFC) at Northern college at Timmins Campus, Ontario. This course is about mutual funds as i am from commerce background, it meets with my criteria and by completing this course, i can join my dream job as a teller at bank.
Generally, i received a call from back home, i came to know that one of my close relatives is very serious i health and he is in emergency ward. Therefore, i had to leave this course.
Actually, this course is about funds that increases my interest in which i learnt how to save money, invest and final step is make money from money. I also followed such steps in my life and invested $2.100 in stocks and i earned $7,000, i not only grabed knowledge but also enjoyed in real life.
Your faithfully,
Harshit Munjal
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| 2021-08-16 | Gourav Munjal | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, regarding, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 792.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44943820225 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45996628027 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662921348315 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1593851748 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 4.34317383033 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141887166425 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066226103989 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573533616889 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.082078445085 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472780693327 0.0580467560999 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.