QUESTION: SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT REST AND SLEEP ARE BEST METHODS TO RELAX,WHILE OTHERS THINK THAT IT CAN BE DONE BY INVOLVING IN SOME ACTIVITIES LIKE SPORTS.DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE. AND GIVE YOUR VIEW.
Relaxation is vital component for an individual's well-being. Some people believe that sleeping and resting are the best ways to relax, whereas, others think that getting involved in sports is a better way to de-stress. I Strongly opine that, taking adequate rest and good sleep are essential as they help in rejuvenating
the body and provide health benefits.
Firstly, to deal with issues related to stress it is importatnt to repose or take a nap. For instance after a long and tiresome day at work, going through
immense work pressure, an individual might not be in a state of doing anything.At such juncture body and mind demands rest which is quite understandable. Moreover,
it helps an individual to recharge for the next day, beating all the anxiety of the previous outing at work.
Another major point to consider is the health of a person.The benefits we get by taking ample sleep and good rest are innumerable.For instance, according
to some health experts , a good nights sleep can be beneficial to lose weight,which is the main cause of heart related diseases.Another instance is , as per
a research conducted by a famous health magazine ,a good nights sleep will improve memory.This is certainly a very good way to improve health by almost
doing nothing.
On the contrary, it has also been observerd that sports is considered as a good way to recline, as it helps a person to socially mingle and also increase the fitness levels.
In conclusion, to deal with day to day work related pressures, stress and improve health aspects, sufficient amount of rest and sleep is inevitable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, moreover, so, well, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02985074627 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88816705132 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585820895522 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.423260993 49.4020404114 238% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 149.777777778 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7777777778 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5555555556 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.38176352705 228% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153029077962 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620070701739 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858645010574 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0521993863691 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715282717384 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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