QUESTION: SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT REST AND SLEEP ARE BEST METHODS TO RELAX,WHILE OTHERS THINK THAT IT CAN BE DONE BY INVOLVING IN SOME ACTIVITIES LIKE SPORTS.DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE. AND GIVE YOUR VIEW.

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QUESTION: SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT REST AND SLEEP ARE BEST METHODS TO RELAX,WHILE OTHERS THINK THAT IT CAN BE DONE BY INVOLVING IN SOME ACTIVITIES LIKE SPORTS.DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE. AND GIVE YOUR VIEW.

Relaxation is vital component for an individual's well-being.Some people believe that sleeping and resting are best ways to relax,whereas,others think that getting involved in sports is a better way to de-stress.I Strongly opine that taking adequate rest and good sleep are essential as they help in rejuvenating
the body and provide health benefits.

Firstly,to deal with issues related to stress it is importatnt to repose or take a nap.For instance after a long and tiresome day at work,going through
immense work pressure,an individual might not be in a state of doing anything.At such juncture body and mind demands rest which is quite understandable.Moreover,
it helps an individual to recharge for the next day, beating all the anxiety of the previous outing at work.

Another major point to consider is the health of a person.The benefits we get by taking ample sleep and good rest are innumerable.For instance, according
to some health experts ,a good nights sleep can be beneficial to lose weight,which is the main cause of heart related diseases.Another instance is ,as per
a research conducted by a famous health magazine ,a good nights sleep will improve memory.This is certainly a very good way to improve health by almost
doing nothing.

On the contrary,it has also been observerd that sports is considered as a good way to recline,as it helps a person to socially mingle and also increase the fitnesslevels.

In conclusion,to deal with day to day work related pressures,stress and improve health aspects, sufficient amount of rest and sleep is inevitable.

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also, first, firstly, moreover, so, well, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31225296443 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.42249584254 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592885375494 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 20.2975951904 246% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 135.113877896 49.4020404114 273% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 268.8 106.682146367 252% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.6 20.7667163134 244% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.0 7.06120827912 269% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.38176352705 228% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13444581439 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676130976544 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593542144931 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0457378152216 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560513888685 0.056905535591 98% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.9 13.0946893788 221% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 20.73 50.2224549098 41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 11.3001002004 202% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.41 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.3 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.1190380762 217% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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