QUESTION Tourism has become an important industry This can damage traditional culture Do the benefits outweigh the drawbacks

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...estyles of the local tourist destination,it is also an essential activity.In my opi...
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...nation,it is also an essential activity.In my opinion,i think that tourism bring...
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...also an essential activity.In my opinion,i think that tourism brings more benefi...
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...lso an essential activity.In my opinion,i think that tourism brings more benefi...
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...tial activity.In my opinion,i think that tourism brings more benefits compared t...
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...vity.In my opinion,i think that tourism brings more benefits compared to any dem...
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...ng. Despite the minor drawbacks below,i believe there are significant merits to...
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...cant merits tourism brings to the people in the tourist destination.Firstly, it c...
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... the people in the tourist destination.Firstly, it can serve as a source of income,the...
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...stly, it can serve as a source of income,thereby increasing the local economy and qual...
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...as a source of income,thereby increasing the local economy and quality of life....
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...me,thereby increasing the local economy and quality of life.For example,the Sun...
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...creasing the local economy and quality of life.For example,the Sun newspaper r...
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...the local economy and quality of life.For example,the Sun newspaper recently rep...
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...conomy and quality of life.For example,the Sun newspaper recently reported that ...
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...y of life.For example,the Sun newspaper recently reported that in 2018,that the...
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...he Sun newspaper recently reported that in 2018,that the UK economy improved dr...
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...ported that in 2018,that the UK economy improved drastically due to the rate at ...
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...ved drastically due to the rate at which tourist influxed the country over the ...
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...e to the rate at which tourist influxed the country over the past years.Secondl...
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... at which tourist influxed the country over the past years.Secondly,another cru...
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...luxed the country over the past years.Secondly,another crucial benefit is the reinvest...
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...he country over the past years.Secondly,another crucial benefit is the reinvestment of...
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...ther crucial benefit is the reinvestment of the income gotten from the tourism fo...
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...ten from the tourism for infrastructural purposes such as medical facilities;indu...
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...lities;industries;roads railway network.As a result,leads to the growth of the ho...
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...stries;roads railway network.As a result,leads to the growth of the host country and...
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... network.As a result,leads to the growth of the host country and even boosting t...
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...leads to the growth of the host country and even boosting tourism more.Thirdly,i...
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...country and even boosting tourism more.Thirdly,it is advantageous for creating jobs f...
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... and even boosting tourism more.Thirdly,it is advantageous for creating jobs for ...
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... tourism more.Thirdly,it is advantageous for creating jobs for the local people. ...
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...ting jobs for the local people. In other words,jobs are made available to the ho...
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...bs for the local people. In other words,jobs are made available to the host country...
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... In other words,jobs are made available to the host country in terms of transpo...
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... are made available to the host country in terms of transportation,accommodation...
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...host country in terms of transportation,accommodation and eatery placesresturants. Admitt...
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... transportation,accommodation and eatery placesresturants. Admittedly,there ar...
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... eatery placesresturants. Admittedly,there are minor drawbacks in tourism. One of...
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...esturants. Admittedly,there are minor drawbacks in tourism. One of the problem...
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...lem is that it might cause environmental damages such as air pollution,erosion an...
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...ronmental damages such as air pollution,erosion and littering the places with dirts.The...
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...ion and littering the places with dirts.Therefore,this might be detrimental to the well b...
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...ittering the places with dirts.Therefore,this might be detrimental to the well being ...
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...l to the well being of the local people.Nevertheless,most tourist countries have environment...
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...l being of the local people.Nevertheless,most tourist countries have environmental of...
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...uch problem does not happen. In addition,tourism can cause cultutal clashes.For instan...
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...ot happen. In addition,tourism can cause cultutal clashes.For instance,some tour...
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... In addition,tourism can cause cultutal clashes.For instance,some tourists might...
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...on,tourism can cause cultutal clashes.For instance,some tourists might behave in...
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...an cause cultutal clashes.For instance,some tourists might behave in an irresponsi...
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....For instance,some tourists might behave in an irresponsible way,refusing to liv...
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...or instance,some tourists might behave in an irresponsible way,refusing to live the lifestyles or obe...
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...urists might behave in an irresponsible way,refusing to live the lifestyles or ...
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...s might behave in an irresponsible way,refusing to live the lifestyles or obey the cu...
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...n an irresponsible way,refusing to live the lifestyles or obey the cultures and...
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...sing to live the lifestyles or obey the cultures and traditions of the local pe...
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...le which could lead to cultural clashes.However, there is no evidence to support this,...
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...al clashes.However, there is no evidence to support this,because local lifestyl...
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...r, there is no evidence to support this,because local lifestyle is still valued by th...
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...alued by they tourists. In conclusion,i will therefore argue that even though t...
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...en though there are drawbacks of tourism,they are outweighed by the benefits of bei...
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...drawbacks of tourism,they are outweighed by the benefits of being a source of i...
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...ism,they are outweighed by the benefits of being a source of income,creating jo...
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...ghed by the benefits of being a source of income,creating jobs and for infrastr...
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...me,creating jobs and for infrastructural development which tourism can bring.
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...obs and for infrastructural development which tourism can bring.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, third, thirdly, well, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1740.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.0 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.30857342911 2.80592935109 154% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572413793103 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.2975951904 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 209.179153759 49.4020404114 423% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 248.571428571 106.682146367 233% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.4285714286 20.7667163134 199% => OK
Discourse Markers: 30.7142857143 7.06120827912 435% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 73.0 5.01903807615 1454% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151934903979 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073578951157 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505604404829 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106943012651 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357772425793 0.056905535591 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.5 13.0946893788 210% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 12.94 50.2224549098 26% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 11.3001002004 191% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.41 12.4159519038 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.62 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.1190380762 182% => OK
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.