Gentic engineering is a controversial field ever since it is introduced. Some are in favour of it, stating it as future of medical science where as others regard it as an interference with nature. In this essay I will discuss pros and cons of the genetic engineering with my opinion in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, genetic engineering is a branch of science which modify the genes making them stronger to withstand the enviorment changes. It has numerous advantages, first and foremost is, bringing advancement in medical field. People around us who do not have legs, hands or other vital organs, soon with the help of gentics will be able to have one. It helps in developing the missing organs in the laboratory from the living cells. Though, research is in intial stage but results show it is just a matter of time before it is going to be a reality. Secondly, progress in agriculture through modified seeds. New species of crops are developed by modifying their genes which give better yield then the previous variety, also they are less prone to the crop diseases. This advancement is going to help in future as it is going to help in acomplisihing the requirement of food grains to ever increasing population. Last but not least, helps in resurrecting the extinct species through their cells which is going to increase the bio diversity. Most of the animals, birds or plants that no longer exist due to unforeseen reasons, they can be developed again with the help of genetic science.
On the flip side, prominent one, playing with nature can have adverse effect on human life which can lead to their extinction. Already effect of disturbing the enviorment are becoming visible so it is a natural phenomenon of equal and opposite reaction to the every action. Another reason is genetic modified fruits and vegetables can cause harmful effect on human body, currently their consumption is banned by most of the countries yet they are illegally traded by the people. Further, it may lead to mutation in humans bringing a new species of them more powerful than them having extraordinary power thus creating a danger for our own race. Moreover, so far no gentically grown living being is able to survive long enough hence even if they are able to invent new species whether they are going to last is still a question.
In conclusion, every science which involves the risk to human lives should be dealt with care. Concern of the people is valid but it is also important to explore new options so that with progress in science can be made which further helps in solving the issues related to human life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, thus, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 13.1623246493 228% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 41.998997996 167% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2175.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 451.0 315.596192385 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82261640798 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62058743942 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547671840355 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 678.6 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9777566478 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.75 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.55 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.65 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107005188032 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0324801986999 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356658970038 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.065839608977 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386304127738 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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