Due to the rapid evolution of human societies, people havenot taken care of nature. In the following paragraphs i will elaborate the reasons for it and discuss the ways to increase the awareness about it.
First and foremost reason is the lifestyle of today's generation, we do not give preference to the natural commodities that nature offer to us. Instead of, we prefer to go for artificial means. For example, for fresh air we will not plant trees arround our house but prefer to buy an air purifier. Similarly, younger generation takes the help of pills to stay lean rather than exercising. To burn calories is a big issue for them, which is a natural process if they go for morning or evening walk. Furthermore, work pressure is so heavy these days on the people that they do not have time for themselves. They have adopted a lifestyle in which health has take a back seat. No due impotance is given to food they eat. Most of them have given up cooking and start eating fast food. So it has caused imbalance in their diet and causes health problems such as high cholesterol level, high blood sugar etc. They need to eat natural food such as fruits, vegetables etc. It will not only provide important minerals to the body but also a rich source of vitamins.
To increase the awareness about the importance of nature, firstly, parents have to led by an example for younger generation. They have to adopt a proper healthy routine so that seeing its positive impact it will encourage them to follow it. Secondly, education is very important. Younger generation needs to be taught the benefits of natural lifestyle. They will also be engaged in programs of nature conservation and green drives. It will help them to associate with nature and also give them first hand experience of being in lap of nature. Last but not least, awareness campaigns by the government and celebrities. They have a huge role to play as they are followed by millions. Younger generation tend to follow their favourite stars, this way they can lead health of their follower on the right track.
Finally, nature has answers to the problems of all living beings. We need to allow the nature to assist us by not disturbing the natural reserves such as forest, rivers, oceans etc. Be as close to the nature as possible to bear the fruits of it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, as for, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1917.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 408.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69852941176 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52552211761 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546568627451 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2379994933 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.7307692308 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6923076923 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143864657456 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0398158520084 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403348891998 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.094079788145 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256395742162 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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