Issues related to men and women are always the subject of debate. Some states that women are more competitive where as other feels men have natural tedency to compete hence they are more competitive. I partially agree with statement. In this essay, I will reason out the facts with my opinion.
To begin with, historically in our culture male remains the dominant sex, as income was based on agriculture, male being physically stronger used to work in the fields. So he is the bread earner for the family and responsibility of the family also lies with him. So, he competes with others for resources thus give rise to his competitive instincts. Secondly, male maries the girl and bring her to his home. Boy never leaves his home. Men are always taught to compete whereas girls are always taught to sacrifice hence competitive skills of male are sharpen from childhood. Last but not least, education plays an important role in it. If we closely look at some phrases of english such as 'Be a man', 'Do not cry like a girl', they all reflect the male as superior sex. So, to upheld his status he compete fiercely with others.
On the flip side, women have nothing to loose but a lot to prove. Slowly and gradually they are getting equal rights so now they are competing in every field. To overcome the injustice done to them, they remain focused, bring sincerity in their approach and hence become a great competitor. Further, women are excellent in time management, they try to make best use of it and bring the result in their favour. Moreover, they do not give up easily as they know chances for them are limited as compared to male, they never get complacent thus giving their best effort. So, it makes them a strong contender.
Finally, as socities are becoming more egalitarian, so competitive ability has become a individual subject. Some girls can be more competitive than boys and vice versa. Men and women are walking shoulder to shoulder in every field and line of demarcation between them has faded.
- In many countries plastic bags are the main source of rubbish causing pollution in oceans and on land; therefore they should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 84
- Many people think that important things in life are mostly free or can t be bought Do you agree or disagree with this statement Give your opinion and examples from your own experience 87
- Mobile phones have become increasingly popular among the younger population. What are the good and bad effects for this? 89
- Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines Should parents be made by law to immunize their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunize their children 61
- Some people say that living in high-rise apartments feels very lonely and makes people unhappy. Others say there are advantages to living in a big apartment building. Discuss both views and give your own opinion 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 111, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
... states that women are more competitive where as other feels men have natural tedency to...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 551, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'sharpened'.
Suggestion: sharpened
...ce hence competitive skills of male are sharpen from childhood. Last but not least, edu...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 795, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'competes'.
Suggestion: competes
...perior sex. So, to upheld his status he compete fiercely with others. On the flip si...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 41, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[3]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...On the flip side, women have nothing to loose but a lot to prove. Slowly and graduall...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 353, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'make the best'.
Suggestion: make the best
...cellent in time management, they try to make best use of it and bring the result in their...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 87, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...rian, so competitive ability has become a individual subject. Some girls can be m...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, hence, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73789173789 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49853813965 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586894586895 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2718038064 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5909090909 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9545454545 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157572283962 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479459045413 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712788238748 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131533202511 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10113966148 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.