In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping.
Is this a positive or a negative development?
A sense of disparity is created between the local shops and high-end shopping centers, due to which the people are more attracted to the malls rather than native shops to do their needful. I believe it is neither a negative nor a positive change.
For the past few years, a variety of shopping malls and centers have been opened up for the public considering their need for upgraded fashion and ease of buying everything at one place. It is definitely a positive development for the economy of the country as the people are aiding to their use. Malls have opened up new employment for the people and provided a source of income for them. Shopping centers add to the aesthetic of the area as they are designed in a particular way using the landscape to attract people.
Although, these new centers are having an adverse effect on the local businesses. People are comparing the two in terms of quality, price range, quantity locality and so on. People are okay paying extra in the centers or mall rather than shopping at the locale. The local businesses are losing their source of income and are trying to find new ways to cope. We need to remember that we live in a country where there are more people in the lower economy sector and the shopping centers or malls don’t cater to them. Hence they end up closing their businesses and taking up a job at such centers if need be.
In conclusion we need to stop focusing on one part of the society and encourage everyone to invest in local business along with malls and shopping centers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 520, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... using the landscape to attract people. Although, these new centers are having an advers...
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Line 3, column 516, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...g centers or malls don’t cater to them. Hence they end up closing their businesses an...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59636363636 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39659262253 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516363636364 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6148018606 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2307692308 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.15384615385 7.06120827912 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281413754748 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100820480539 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064764113764 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190816208209 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745283835687 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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