In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping.
nowadays, it is believed that, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping. in this essay i completely agree with this statement because it has more demerit rather than merit for some reasons.
in the one hand the main benefit of opened big shopping centres is make people who came to buy something for their life feel comfortable rather than when visiting small shop, it is because average supermarket has complete facilities like parking area, toilet and other facilities to make visitor enjoy when shopping for example every single person who has planed for bought their daily needs usually prefer come to big market because facilities in there more than small market, as result make supermarket has crowded visitor and growing be fast in every region. it is important that the reason why large market can dominated buyer because their providing excelent facilities for visitor to make every visitor addicted for coming again.
however, there are some drowbacks of this problem, firstly, small business which don't have more facilities can be bankrupt, it is due to people who as buyer changed their interest from small store to big store since big store opened, take as on example small shops which just have little facilities possible bankrupt while many big store opened, because their income everyday has decreasing, so that make many small store closed one by one. secondly make poor society losed their job, it is because their business closed closed when big store, an other example when their store closed because their income not enough for their family after big store opened, neverthless made increasing of unemployment in every region rather than before big store opened. it is drubt that supermarket directly can make small business closes because their has good facilities more than small business.
to sum up from where i stand, i believed big store can dominated small store when government don't have good regulation for there, in my opinion government should made good role for save their region from unemployment especially for poor people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1787.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12034383954 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33221277477 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489971346705 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.2975951904 212% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 151.79900362 49.4020404114 307% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 223.375 106.682146367 209% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.625 20.7667163134 210% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.875 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315049160002 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.189714935751 0.084324248473 225% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.218391986456 0.0667982634062 327% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232050395278 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.16655343039 0.056905535591 293% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.5 13.0946893788 187% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.1190380762 190% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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