In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers are travel to large shopping centres to d their shopping.
Recently, much smaller indigenous shops have shutdown due to large influx of people to bigger shopping complex centres for their shopping. And this is definitely a demerit because it will lead to unemployment and poor standard of living.
Needless to say, there is going to be an increase in unemployment. When people businesses closed down, the resulting hardship is inevitable because that is where they make money to meet their daily obligations and will lead and increased strain on government funds as such people will have to depend on government for sustenance. In addition, there has been an increase in rate of crime as most of them result into robbery and constitute a menace to the entire community due to idleness. Many people have lost their lives and properties and a host of law-abiding citizens go about their daily work with panic and fear of being robbed or harassed.
In addition, low standard of living is inevitable when people cannot provide for themselves it leads to many hardships. Feeding becomes a serious issue, accommodation is also another problem encountered and most importantly, their children may end up being out of school due to inability to pay school fees. For example, in 2015 , the erection of Maryland Shopping Mall , a lot of people stopped patronising convenience stores in the locality which led to a lot of businesses closing down.
To conclude, the emergence of bigger shops in shopping malls has been a pitfall for many smaller shops around their communities and that has led to mass unemployment and indescribable condition of living.
- You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help 89
- you are going to another country to study and would like to do a part time job while studying. 73
- Do being a celebrity come with more advantages or disadvantages. Give relevant examples. 73
- In many countries the amount of crime is increasing What do you think are the main causes of crime and how can we deal with those causes 76
- Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as Sahara desert or the Antarctic. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 329, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...to pay school fees. For example, in 2015 , the erection of Maryland Shopping Mall ...
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Line 5, column 370, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
..., the erection of Maryland Shopping Mall , a lot of people stopped patronising con...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, may, so, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09195402299 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85650800596 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578544061303 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.1770627244 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.9 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259835659145 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0944132181836 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0977054477258 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17688704322 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0779071698023 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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