In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping center or mall to do their shopping.
Is this a positive or a negative development?
Some people argue that micro businesses have been shutting down because of advent of large shopping centres. Although I accept that shopping malls offer a lot in terms of shopping experience, I also believe that shutting down of local stores has some impact local communities.
The downfall of small business has, without a doubt, troubled the society. Clearly, many shopkeepers, struggling to up keep the competition, had their businesses shut. these people, especially the elderly, mostly lacking the skill sets or a degree, have ended up resorting to meager jobs. To add to their misery, their families have been bearing the brunt of adverse future hung upon them. In addition to, the malls only have few stores, so not many would be able to secure a place for their ventures. so, the wealth is being accumulated in few hands. Overall, small retailers have been overshadowed by big investors.
On the other side, shopping malls has brought about a major shift in the shopping experience of the public. To address the tastes of the public, they offer a wider variety, under one roof, unlike regular markets. Further, this single window system not only provides a hassle free system from buying, trying and checking out but also accommodates other businesses as well. For instance, food courts, cinemas, children’s play games, parking and so on. Thus, the customers never goes away without spending a penny.
In conclusion, there are both upsides and downsides of inaugurating of big ventures like these. It is the shop-owners who have to perform with the pace of the ever-changing arena of the market.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 169, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
...competition, had their businesses shut. these people, especially the elderly, mostly ...
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Line 5, column 503, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...e to secure a place for their ventures. so, the wealth is being accumulated in few...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16226415094 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68400852167 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.667924528302 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.559112798 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5625 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4375 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254257296666 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676171118675 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605547542688 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133327545597 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563425971873 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.