Nobody wants to be left behind, Where money is the king. Nowadays, Every urban areas has development very fast like all sector education , industries , commercial , health and so many things. But don't forget the population, Whose are connected all sectors and their effects creates some problems. Which is discussed by below essay as per my perception to problems & solutions.
First of all , looking to problems, During few years, myriad number of cities are developed very fast . That's why, nearby rural areas peple transfer to mega city. In the reason of many employers are not getting good job in commercial as well as industrial sector. So, Company has not increased salary for employer. The second things is that company have been not opened more vacancies. In addition, Rural areas people transfer to city areas. Which is creates problem to education sector. Education will be very costly day by day. Even don't forget to infrastructure , Government need to more infrastructure for increasing population and then every person feel big experience for crowded traffic. Moreover, After increasing population, Government will be constructed more accommodation and educational institute. Because of rural areas are not progressive.
Think to positively and looking for the solution, Government provide basic facility like accommodation , education , health center and primary requirement for each people like water facility , creates health amenities , sports amenities. Government must be concentrate at industrial as well as commercial sector , Where is creates more job vacancy for migrate people. For progressive country, they should also provide low cost and easy transportation and health facility and education facility.
In recapitulation , I tend to deem that lookout at problems and their solutions. In my perception by above essay Government must be make to law of against increase population and should be some controlled on migrating people. That's the big solution is the my point of view.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...al areas people transfer to city areas. Which is creates problem to education sector....
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...ating people. Thats the big solution is the my point of view.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, look, moreover, second, so, then, well, in addition, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54435483871 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03919696533 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620967741935 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.1289325187 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.8823529412 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5882352941 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29411764706 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0791743091767 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0263236901705 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0136396920966 0.0667982634062 20% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0512427155404 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0153837212736 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.26 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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