In the information technological era, We live in rich lifestyle with happiness. People get all the information for knowledge of the world in our reach inspire of living in this modern world. But, in the modern era, many people doesn't like to feel happy with information technology, while technology increased day by day and help to all person with every kind of knowledge. I discuss about through essay, as per my perception want to find out what is the reason behind it and offer some solution.
First & Foremost view to positive side, We can connected friends, family and every person by social media through use of information technology. We can share everything like audio , video , pictures , software application to everyone in just few time. We can talk with video calling in every place of whole world. Furthermore , in the recent period, myriad number of companies are doing online business through use of website or software application. Which is the bless of increased technology with going fast information in this modern era. By example, Amazon is a company of USA. But it's all product are sell out only through online in every location of whole world. Nowadays, Many person are making relationship via social media or another way like dating site, friendship club or single person whose are interested for marriage. They use of marriage bueraw site.
At least but not last, Do not forget drawback also. Media & News channels got survey after research is that online relationship has been not successful and chances of miss use or fraud to usage of internet. Sometimes, it may be possible big fraud for money via online hacking. Even, may be leakage our privacy by information of internet. May be chances of hacking bussiness site or companies software application and so on. Yet, here few people are not awareness to use of information regarding technology because of they can not understand to use of proper way or sometime have not been good knowledge for this matter. Also, myriad number of person have been not changed own old traditional method, due to they have been habitat in old system. That's why they are not interested for this technology.
To sum up, Discuss by prons and cons through this essay. Which include more positive effects than few negative impact. According to me, want to ignore some people, whose are not interested for amazing information technology. In the reason of this technology is bless for every person about life, business, education, health or everything.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 228, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ld. But, in the modern era, many people doesnt like to feel happy with information tec...
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Line 3, column 48, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'connect'
Suggestion: connect
... Foremost view to positive side, We can connected friends, family and every person by soc...
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Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...logy. We can share everything like audio , video , pictures , software application...
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Line 3, column 188, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... can share everything like audio , video , pictures , software application to ever...
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Line 3, column 199, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...everything like audio , video , pictures , software application to everyone in jus...
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Line 3, column 243, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'few times'.
Suggestion: few times
...oftware application to everyone in just few time. We can talk with video calling in ever...
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Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... every place of whole world. Furthermore , in the recent period, myriad number of ...
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Line 3, column 452, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...use of website or software application. Which is the bless of increased technology wi...
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Line 3, column 461, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...bsite or software application. Which is the bless of increased technology with going fast...
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Line 3, column 680, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun person seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many people', 'Many persons'.
Suggestion: Many people; Many persons
...very location of whole world. Nowadays, Many person are making relationship via social medi...
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Line 5, column 47, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...st but not last, Do not forget drawback also. Media & News channels got survey after...
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Line 5, column 507, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_I[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'because they' instead.
Suggestion: because they
...use of information regarding technology because of they can not understand to use of proper way...
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Line 5, column 746, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...o they have been habitat in old system. Thats why they are not interested for this te...
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Line 7, column 58, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s by prons and cons through this essay. Which include more positive effects than few ...
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Line 7, column 120, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...itive effects than few negative impact. According to me, want to ignore some people, whose are ...
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Line 7, column 262, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'blessed', 'blest'.
Suggestion: blessed; blest
...gy. In the reason of this technology is bless for every person about life, business, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, regarding, so, while, at least, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 41.998997996 171% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2091.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 417.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01438848921 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68387011512 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532374100719 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 675.9 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.9544491491 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.64 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.68 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152314661965 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404788281768 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045484475836 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966070681358 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554305654716 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.