Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
According to recent research, the rate of abortion has been increasing sharply. People have different views that whether this action have to be lawful or not. This essay will argue both side of this arguable issue. As a whole, I prefer that government enact a strict law for abortion.
On one hand, people believe that legal abortion will lead to some advantaged results. Firstly, it makes people to be more attentive about contraception methods. Secondly, law acts as a deterring force from performing this vicious function because I believe that abortion is as horrible as murder since infants are alive as humans. At last but not least, gathering forensic evidence should be compulsory for abortion and can prevent from unreasonable abortion.
On the other hand, there is also a belief that abortion should be admissible. An obvious argument in its favor is that mostly people make a decision of abortion when they don't have suitable situation for giving birth to a baby and bringing up him or her. In circumstance like it, abortion is the best solution, Moreover, if abortion without forensic license is forbidden, it could lead to do it action by unauthentic people and in improper place so that could increase likelihood of infectious ailments. For instance, last year I read an disappointment news in newspaper that a pregnant woman which was force by her husband to abort her baby in an underground office by an amateur elderly woman. After three months she was diagnosed with a progressive cancer and finally she was terminally ill.
In conclusion, it seems to me that I persist on the idea of abortion should be statutory to alleviate the rate of unnecessary killing of susceptible infants.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 171, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e make a decision of abortion when they dont have suitable situation for giving birt...
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Line 3, column 535, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ilments. For instance, last year I read an disappointment news in newspaper that a...
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Line 4, column 159, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cessary killing of susceptible infants.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, as for, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80835852477 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62323943662 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2766490162 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.428571429 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231784152494 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793972021634 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480168238705 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129141927013 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263176387904 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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