You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, the ratio of aborting the child from mother womb is rising and becoming a trending issue of the country. Some individual believe that, government should made abortion legal for safety of the mother, where other are opposed of it. This essay will discuss on both view and i am supporting to make it legal and safe.
Firstly, killing a unborn child inside the worm is not correct and does not reflect the humanity. However, there can be different circumtanses where even doctor advice not to keep child. In this type of conditions if the parents find safe and legal abortion service, that can be safe for the mother's health. For example, due to some medical condition, if the baby is not growing inside the womb and later it can be dangerious to mother. In such case hospital itself ask parents not to keep the child. Another reason to make it legal is that, many of the femal had even risktheir life or even death due to use unprescribe medicine for the abortion. Moreover, due to illegal condition, many of them are paying high money to agent for tihis service. However, saying that it should me legal, there must some acceptable reason for abortiona and constant of both parents.
On the other hand, in developing and under develop country, people give priority to boy than girl and even in illegal case, they are aborting if they found the baby is femal. In this case, making aborting child legal can increase the crime. Some families even force mother to do this for the domestic voilence. For instance, husband can forcefully abort the child because he has affair to another girl or sowin career growth compramising wife's health. As a result of aborting, women can loss her fertility and negative impact on physical and mental health.
In conclusion, I believe that making aborting legal can make it safe but people need to show strong clause to do it. Both parents consent must be necessary and most importantly government should educate people in this issue
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 164, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires base form of the verb: 'make'.
Suggestion: make
...ividual believe that, government should made abortion legal for safety of the mother...
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Line 1, column 282, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: i is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...his essay will discuss on both view and i am supporting to make it legal and safe...
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Line 3, column 18, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...it legal and safe. Firstly, killing a unborn child inside the worm is not cor...
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Line 5, column 439, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...girl or sowin career growth compramising wifes health. As a result of aborting, w...
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Line 7, column 16, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...l and mental health. In conclusion, I believe that making aborting legal can ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1641.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79824561404 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3889461509 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53216374269 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.4257751233 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.1666666667 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195885700328 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684087035159 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561913482411 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146292444146 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479465814657 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.