Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.
Why do you think this is happening?
What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
According to recent research, high rate of producing litter is one of the horrible threaten for environment . In today's consuming world, garbage is generated in much more than before. there are various of possible reasons for this, but steps can be definitely taken to tackle this problem.
In my opinion, the main cause is unaware of people from the side-effects of producing rubbish. To be more specific, some people know the positive effect of separating different sorts of litter in recycling process bu they are uncaring about it. For instance, last year my city's council presented a brochure with some recycle bin for separating wet from dry garbage or recyclable from unrecyclable debris but people have not paid any attention to it. Another reason is that in nowadays' hectic world people are indulging single-use products such as dishes or fork and so on that this approach can leads to brutally harm to environment.
I believe that there are several steps that government can do to solve or at least make dull this issue. Firstly, increase knowledge of society about drawbacks of producing huge amount of waste. For example, by sparkling advertisement or holding various workshops, people would be tempted to control the generation of garbage. Secondly, should enact a strict law about the weight of domestic litter and who does not obey this rule will be imposed by a high tax penalties. The last but not least is restricting the producing of expandable goods which are produced by plastic or other unrecyclable materials and superseding them by recyclable ones.
In cconclusion, although there are range of causes of huge amount of producing waste such as incognizance of society or their willing to use single-use stuffs but government can overcome to this problem by some simple steps include holding workshops to knowingness of people or constraint the production of goods with unrecyclable raw materials.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...of the horrible threaten for environment . In todays consuming world, garbage is g...
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Line 1, column 185, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
... is generated in much more than before. there are various of possible reasons for thi...
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Line 3, column 474, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
...attention to it. Another reason is that in nowadays hectic world people are indulging singl...
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Line 3, column 596, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...r fork and so on that this approach can leads to brutally harm to environment. I bel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, at least, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14696485623 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8304147966 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591054313099 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.7521920038 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.923076923 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0769230769 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201956632128 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701659066348 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442250193692 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117518020839 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.024142558972 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.