Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.
Why do you think this is happening?
What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced.
On of the major problems of many countries and in other words, the world biggest worries is producing rubbish. There are many environmentalisms that are worried about the future of our planet.
Unfortunately, producing wastes are becoming dramatically more, and endless contamination of natural environment such as oceans, wilderness, seas and rivers has caused other species and creatures to be in danger. By technology growth, artificial stuffs have been entered to human life and from our kitchen to our smart phones these are observable. Furthermore, plastics and artificial materials have the ability of high resistance in nature. Sometimes, it takes 200 years that a plastic bottle to decompose. However, people are not aware of how artificial materials and plastic stuffs can have drastic effects on our planet and also our future generations. We see people throwing their wastes to rivers, nature, beaches, roads and seas, and the number of marine creatures dying because of pollutants are increasing. Cans, plastic bottles, plastic bags, polyester materials and dishes, all are produced and entered to our life in recent years and it is our fault that pollutants have become a piece of our life.
In a period of time, there was not any control and supervision in producing plastic materials from governments and they merely considered their benefits without no matter to consequences. But, today by means of social media warnings, they can not be able to hide the reality and the only thing that they can do is that without considering their benefits, dedicate budgets in order to environmental scientists, experts and environmentalists begin programming a long term scheduled activities to control the problems arising from rubbish.
All in all, we only ourselves can help each other and also our environment from becoming worse than now it is.
- Many governments think that economic progress is most important goal some people however think that other types of progress and equally important for a country 84
- The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- The Graph below shows average carbon dioxide CO2 emissions per person in the United Kindom Sweden Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 87
- You have recently moved to a different house Write a letter to an English speaking friend In your letter explain why you have moved describe the new house invite your friend to come and visit 11
- Some people believe that children are given too much free time They feel that this time should be used to do more school work How do you think children should spend their free time 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 6, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ve become a piece of our life. In a period of time, there was not any control and supervis...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31756756757 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96288213779 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570945945946 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.5859286066 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.166666667 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13301227479 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440303516318 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427090587598 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0811089702824 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220479361694 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.