Research suggests that the majority of criminals who are sent to prison commit crimes when set free.
What are the reasons? What can be done to solve the problem?
A study shows that there are a high proportion of inmates recommitting crimes once released. The primary cause of this phenomenon is that most the prison systems are a punishment system and the most viable solution is changing to rehabilitate prisoners.
The main reason associated with a high rate of repeat offenders is that the principal purpose of prison is to punish criminals and this system does not provide inmates any skill to get a job after being released. Therefore, offenders find difficult to earn a living and have to rely on the financial support of their families. Subsequently, criminals have no way to repeatedly commit offences in order to make a living. For example, a study of American prisons in 2017 where is the punishment system applied showed that just under 30% of inmates serving their first prison sentence.
To tackle this issue governments should shift their prison system to rehabilitation because the prisoners can reintegrate into society once set free. If, upon released, offenders can get an opportunity to a job and they can support their families as well as enjoy their freedom which they can not get in jail. Moreover, this would shed some light on people who committed crimes in their early adulthood to life a normal live after prison terms. For instance, Ireland has changed its prison system to rehabilitate inmates since 2015 and it witnesses 15% decrease of repeat offenders the following year.
In conclusion, the main cause of the high proportion of criminals recommitting crimes is the punishment system of many prisons which does not help inmates to reintegrate once released and the proper solution of this is shifting to a rehabilitation system.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10357142857 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80954777028 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532142857143 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.2000679761 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.909090909 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.54545454545 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147805847534 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06110231869 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381190928504 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0891427235665 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391644399811 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.