The rise of convenience foods has helped people keep up with the speed of the modern life style. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantage?
In this fast-paced world, cooking is considered a trivial task owing to which there has been a boom in the demand of packaged food. Although this kind of food has made the life of workaholics easy, its repercussions on health and becoming an addiction cannot be neglected due to which I firmly argue that its downsides outnumber the benefits.
To commence with the principle merit of consuming packed food, 21st century is of people who work for prolonged hours due to which they are left with no time to cook food. As a result, buying canned meals from supermarkets which can be prepared in just blink of an eye, is found to be most convenient method. The best example of this is Americans who highly rely on these meals as they prioritize their career over such a tedious task of preparing meals. Thus, these food items have become need of some.
Despite providing convenience, canned food is putting human health at stake. To elaborate, these meals are injected with preservatives in order to prevent it from being spoiled which make these deficit of necessary nutrients and minerals. In its consequence, humans might suffer from bodily ailments can b have deleterious impact in long run.To illustrate this fact, a research was published by WHO which clearly stated that there is no impact of antibiotics on humans due to development of chemical-resistance. Therefore, the day is not far when not even a single human being will be healthy.
Apart from this, convenience food is making people addictive since if they eat it for once, they start craving for it again and again. This is because of the fact that the dishes taste scrumptious and people are unable to resist it. Take an example of pizzas or pastas which has been introduced in so much of varieties with varied taste that consumers are lured to eat it every now and then. Hence, making them unhealthy, especially obese.
To reiterate, it can be said that though the life of working class is at ease, detrimental effects are taking a toll of human health which needs urgent attention.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 188, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this deficit' or 'these deficits'?
Suggestion: this deficit; these deficits
...revent it from being spoiled which make these deficit of necessary nutrients and minerals. In...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
...n b have deleterious impact in long run.To illustrate this fact, a research was pu...
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Line 4, column 143, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
...craving for it again and again. This is because of the fact that the dishes taste scrumptious and people...
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Line 4, column 372, Rule ID: EVERY_NOW_AND_THEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
...aste that consumers are lured to eat it every now and then. Hence, making them unhealthy, especial...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, then, therefore, thus, apart from, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1701.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81869688385 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69112867005 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592067988669 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2494253667 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.4 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5333333333 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10317149303 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0365861210907 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347662394637 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0594774001435 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294186259156 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.