School teachers are more responsible for social and intellectual development of students than parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
it is always seen that teacher got keen interest in student's overall development than parents. I agree with this statement because children can learn loads of skills in school as well as school helps in development of children intellectual mind.
School is a very important part of every student's life and teachers play a pivotal role in overall development of children. Firstly, teachers facilitate the students in development of teamwork and leadership skills. They give them different assignment which enables students to work with their peers towards completion of it. Secondly, students more often influenced by the etiquette's of their teacher, for example, their way of talking, way of approaching, behaviour and so on. By doing so they may also influenced to be like them.
Talking about intellectual development, I think no place is better than school to develop such skills. Teachers in the school are expertise in their field and it is a duty of the teacher to impart the problem solving, imagination or idea generation skills to their students. Teachers do understand individual students due to daily interaction and they identify the potential of each students. They also know the various way to solve the problem of each students.
On the other hand, parents today are very busy in their working life. They often don't have much time for their child so they does not understand them very well. They do not know the difficulties faced by their child, how to handle them during failure, how to improve their learning and so on. Parents always ignore the mistake of their child so he/she does not feel that they commit mistakes. However, I admit that some parents give personal attention to them but it's not enough for their social or intellectual development.
In summary, I can say school is the only place where child developed but it does not mean that parent should not look after their children and depends only on school.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
it is always seen that teacher got keen in...
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Line 3, column 42, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...chool is a very important part of every students life and teachers play a pivotal role i...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... busy in their working life. They often dont have much time for their child so they ...
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Line 7, column 126, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'do'
Suggestion: do
... have much time for their child so they does not understand them very well. They do ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, i think, in summary, talking about, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02469135802 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6618540821 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530864197531 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.435679097 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7647058824 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0588235294 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23529411765 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247549269503 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869225002334 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657189187813 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153633902679 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076555251109 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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