Science gives people life expectancy of close to one hundred years or even more. Some people view it in a positive light, but others believe it creates some problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Evolving technology has made life and work easier. While handful of people think that it has strengthened the greatest age of the millennial nearest to cross a century. While other holds an opposite view. I opine that this trend has both an optimistic and pessimistic approach to it.
To begin the benefits, with the improvement in the drugs and medicine line, lead to production of multifarious anti aging, longevity capsules, prolong life vitamins and injections. Besides, significant growth in high disposable income people bargain their leisure with hypothetical surgeries, operations, multi vitamins for the ever-increasing growth of life. For instance, in metropolis a group of people from matured to elderly seek dosage of drugs available easily in the market. Admittedly, addiction to myriad multivitamins regularly twice or thrice in a day to stay young. Apparently, the enhancement in the sports world with new supportive equipment make a person to remain vehemently fit and healthy for ages.
Looking at the other side of the argument, the predominate disadvantage of this blessings is the excessive usage which led to abdominal disturbance, weakness and instability in the body. Hence, over consumption exacerbate them long-term illness and danger to survival. Whats's more people certainly who are in age of 70 's or 90's can suffer from fracture, heart attack and prone to illness while performing strenuous exercises on heavy equipment.
By hammering the final nail, I pen down by saying, despite the many benefits of the scientific advancements products and services age can be controlled through technological devices but natural death cannot be manipulated by humans through any means.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 53, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...chnology has made life and work easier. While handful of people think that it has str...
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Line 1, column 171, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... millennial nearest to cross a century. While other holds an opposite view. I opine t...
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Line 5, column 445, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e from matured to elderly seek dosage of drugs available easily in the market. Ad...
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Line 5, column 720, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in vehemently fit and healthy for ages. Looking at the other side of the argumen...
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Line 9, column 44, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...king at the other side of the argument, the predominate disadvantage of this blessings is the e...
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Line 9, column 76, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...gument, the predominate disadvantage of this blessings is the excessive usage which ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, besides, but, hence, if, look, so, then, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47547169811 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07023747202 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68679245283 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7435347199 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.615384615 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100836924825 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0336147751194 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322431164199 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0533748756535 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392046683364 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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