you are going on vacation and need someone to look after your apartment while you are on vacation
Write a letter to your friend,
where are the key ,
ask him to take care of your apartment,
what to expect on the day of your arrival.
Dear James,
Hope this letter find you in radiant health and bests spirit. I am writing to you to look after my house during my visit to the Paris from 20th of October until 1st of December.
Primarily, if you can aid me in supervising my place for a couple of days. Besides this, I have put the key in the letter box. Moreover, |I have done proper cleanliness last week, if you can just vacuüm and change garbage bins every Sunday. Also, not to forget to pay my utility bills in the last of the month. Likely, I have kept the bills in front drawer of my bedroom.
Additionally, I have stored vegetables and fruits in the refrigerators. At a certain time, if you need to buy anything i kept my gift card on the study desk to use it.
Lastly, I would be delighted to meet you after my journey and will buy a souvenir for you definitely as a first priority. Likely, I will share my experience and photos with a cup of tea at café.
Enjoy the place and do write to me or email me at frequent times in touch with each other.
Best regards,
Sam.
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| 2019-09-28 | Sarab.rathor4@gmail.com | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear James, Hope this letter find you in radiant h...
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Line 13, column 120, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...rtain time, if you need to buy anything i kept my gift card on the study desk to ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, lastly, look, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 875.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35323383085 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38663929565 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621890547264 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.0515615492 44.8134815571 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.3076923077 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4615384615 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105893090928 0.216113520407 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0362930173076 0.0766984524023 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360715753331 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0591713948674 0.12726935374 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035635375606 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.