with the recent improvements to the internet, poeple can leave views or opinions on certain goods or services they have purchased. is this good or bad , discuss both side and giving your opinion.
The techonolgy has been given a paramount importance. With the development of internet milleninials are taking its multifarious benefits to its full extent . There are range of reasons of this such as online shopping sites , banking service , ticket buying and so on. People can use this service sitting at home with just a click and if it is fruitful giving the service high reveiws if its useless than filling the empty box full of bad comments. I shall look into both sides before forming an opinion.
In the yester years, internet can be used by rich people who have access to smartphones and computers. Barely , any student can use the world wide web for the information . The internet was like once in a blue moon for medium class families. Due to the advancements in the internet , now each and every person have access to the intent . It has now become a cheap source of communication , trade and source. In the back days , It was like counting on fingers to buy any thing via web and then get back shipping in a month. for instance , if a elite woman who wants to buy dress they have to go through a many process and verification . Then they can have their purchased item deliver at their home in a month. At that time people value and respects the internet policies . They don't get frustrated on the shipping material or their internet services . Besides they were quite glad to get their things availability at home without going to the preferred location.
On the contrary , juvenile delinquency is mainly responsible for this kind of unethical things . Nowadays , youngsters borrow things from the websites . It has become convenient for them to browe the google and click and have anything they worth within minutes. For example , their are maximum of applications on playstores of every website. such as MacDonald , Td bank app, Sep hora and so on . Any one can use this facility if a elder wants to eat pizza they can order online and they don't like their service they put it under bad reviews . This is the way through which others are able to know the right and misleading things from their opinions and reviews.
in my personal opinion , i think this is the best way and a positive trend through which other people will have useful information of that service by seeing their reviews whether to buy or not.
To put it in nutshell , technology has its two sides , we can use it in our favor or suspenseful way . in earlier times people can have its access with a full trust .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, look, so, then, for example, for instance, i think, kind of, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2049.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 437.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68878718535 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53479257848 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528604118993 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 636.3 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7453394157 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8076923077 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8076923077 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76923076923 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 47.0 5.01903807615 936% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232421295154 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588417929626 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481573718572 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133909809533 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342296951762 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.