Science tells us the activities which are good for our health and which are bad. Millions of people all over the world know this and still do unhealthy activities. Why do think this is and what can be done to change this.
Due to technological and scientific progress, people can now differentiate between healthy and unhealthy activities. however, a large portion of globe population still indulge themselves in unhealthy activities. There are quite a few reasons for their tendency and by shedding some light on the causes of this phenomenon, we can understand the measures that can be taken to mitigate the situation. Both causes and solutions are elucidated in ensuing paragraphs.
Pondering on the factors affecting this tendency, the foremost one is sedentary lifestyle that people are enjoying. Due to advent of technology and avail of different contrivances, general public are lethargic more than ever. The modern instruments render them conveniences and because of that they are being obese. For example, everyone knows that it is better to walk 15 minutes a day but to commute even closer places they prefer their private vehicles.
In my opinion, there are many panaceas that can ameliorate the situation. Firstly, awareness regarding potential dangers that people may face in future due to unhealthy lifestyle should be spread through government, media and social websites. Additionally, health awareness camp should be conducted in residential areas to make people aware of unhealthy life. Instead of focusing on benefits that healthy life can provide, we should focus on dangers associated with unhealthy lifestyle. In addition, government should establish recreational facilities free of cost in various ares of a city so that all people can engage in physical activities.
To conclude and recapitulate, it is quite conspicuous from aforementioned deliberation that due to advent and avail of modern technologic devices people live unhealthy lifestyle. However, by health awareness and free physical activity inducing facilities can ameliorate the situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, regarding, so, still, as to, for example, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67025089606 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06864883049 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591397849462 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7014783385 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.466666667 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195780516929 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596476872615 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377836576433 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112242362987 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365279314196 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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