Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree?
scientific research is a vital part of every country. some subscribe to this fact governments should be warden and subsidize these researches but other prefer private corporations. In my opinion, despite that, nongovernmental companies would invest a vast money on a project. it's high time governments took responsible about these explorations.
A good reason that government must manipulate scientific probes is private funds include two dangerous aspects for a country. Investigators may force the scientist to use their intelligence against moral and ethnic matters. For instance, detection a new cell that would kill a person for benefits motives. other disastrous danger is some of this finding and projects don’t consider the harmful effects which will affect a vast population in a particular location. In another word, they would damage a majority of population without any responsibility. In fact, people may face to imminent perils.
Finally, when governments are wardens. scientists would use a various range of facilities like using any laboratories and universities in anywhere. Furthermore, States provide a safe and controlled platform for rising their Science, also, it could be a good reason for students in the universities to gain more knowledge while they are working and helping researchers.
To conclude, even though, people debate on who is advance to manufacture scientific issues. In my opinion, rarely are there benefits in personal investors. The more private scientific probing, the much threats for governments.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The adverb 'rarely' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
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...he more private scientific probing, the much threats for governments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, if, may, so, while, for instance, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67094017094 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15038433684 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662393162393 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.0096777788 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9375 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.625 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144236612551 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451812452114 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565464450259 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0894022196266 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511903770171 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.01 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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