It is no denying that technology equipment a more pivotal role for serval people in existing time. Therefore, scientists considering whether computers will become enough intelligent as human beings. Although, few masses of argued it will beneficial development, in contrary side unfavourable development in upcoming life. I will explain both views in the upcoming paragraph.
Commencing with the would-be enough salient helpful development of the human life . Owing to , more changes in human lifestyle than past . since on this equipment on the available social website instead of they easily talk with friends and relatives , who lived another nation . Moreover , it very rapidly helps in business work every day in the phenomenon as well as they are easily saving related business data in electronic equipment . Due to , they feel like relaxation . Ergo , it is fact that despite individual life look at more changes today time .
Another with converting that how it is a negative development for the upcoming generation life . Most masses believe not only it is harmful , but also people will addict it . For example , it can be observed whether nowadays which bad impact on young generation life . who more time spent on this computer and they are avoid to hard work . In addition , they do not use their physical skill and more preference the technology equipment , therefore , it is clear that hazardous influence on future .
To sum up, while the computer is a more crucial role in the day to day scenario. Although, the trend of computer has more advantage, yet we can not ignore the awful effects of this trend on infants life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in addition, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1358490566 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77101597116 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592452830189 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3361159442 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0588235294 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5882352941 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23529411765 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217150703432 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695337052676 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546062239233 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131025477947 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522214941698 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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