Climate change and global worming is quite common terms we heard now a days and it is proven fact the the energy which we are using in our daily life, caused enormous amount of negative effect on our environment.
However, there are few people who ignore the threat of environment change and want to continue with convenstional energy, but considering the impact on our earth atmosphere we should move to clean energy resources like which does not harm the natural balance.
Firstly, considering the point of depending on fossil energy sources, as it is proved that fossil energy is easily available, most of the daily needs items run on it for an instance, car, trucks, train, electric power plants used oil to generate the energy.
Secondly, Other mode of energy resources are less common and expensive, there fore, people do not want to invest their money in alternative energy, because they are clueless about the drawback and limitations of the clean energy. Moreover, there is very little awareness among the society about renewable energy.These factors are the main reason for ignoring the caution of protection of environment.
Despite, the mentioned points there are few steps needs to be take, in-order to promote the zero carbon emission energy.
Firstly, Government and responsible agencies should start the campaign program to aware the citizen about the use and benefit of alternative energy.Secondly,Instead of generating electricity by coal based power plant, Hydro power plants, Wind turbine, solar panels should be used.Above all of these, Automobile sector should promote and produce electric car and trucks and there should a provision to give subsidy on these vehicles, so that people will moved toward them.
To conclude, Excess use of fuels and energy already damaged our environment enormously, Thus, it is our call to protect our environment, to do this we should move to clean energy and this is last option left with us to save our earth.
- World history suggests that violence and conflict were more evident under male leadership than under female leadership.So, for peace to prevail, female leadership can be considered as a better option than male leadership. To what extent do you agree or di 61
- Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful, others disagree. Discuss both the vie 73
- Nowadays, many families have both parents working. Some working parents believe that other family members can take care of their children, while others think childcare centers are better. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 67
- Some people think that the effective way to reduce pollution is to tax the companies which cause it. Others think that there are better ways to achieve this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 72
- Caring for children is probably the most important thing of the society It is suggested that all mothers and fathers should be required to take the childcare training courses To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement 72
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
... worming is quite common terms we heard now a days and it is proven fact the the energy wh...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... heard now a days and it is proven fact the the energy which we are using in our daily ...
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
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Suggestion: therefore
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...mong the society about renewable energy.These factors are the main reason for ignorin...
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Suggestion: Secondly
...e use and benefit of alternative energy.Secondly,Instead of generating electricity by co...
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...d benefit of alternative energy.Secondly,Instead of generating electricity by coal based...
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Suggestion: Above
...nd turbine, solar panels should be used.Above all of these, Automobile sector should ...
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Suggestion: move
... on these vehicles, so that people will moved toward them. To conclude, Excess use...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16822429907 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76628497568 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591900311526 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.2574672428 49.4020404114 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 207.375 106.682146367 194% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.125 20.7667163134 193% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233661356509 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100395324932 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444721455733 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105637960994 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506406931578 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.0 13.0946893788 176% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.42 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 23.0 10.7795591182 213% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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