Shopping has become new favourite pastime for young generation. Why is this the case? Should you encourage them to develop other hobbies too?
In recent years, shopping has gain popularity over other things. It is often argued that many people especially youngsters prefer to shop in their leisure time. This essay will examine the causes of this trend, and supports the argument that young crowd should be motivated to opt other creative activities.
To begin with, the most important factor for encouragement towards shopping can be attributed to relating one's happiness with the materialistic pleasure. This is because buying new clothes and accessories has become a norm, and an asset which is directly evaluated with satisfaction and happiness. For instance, some people follow celebrities and copy their style to feel content and happy about themselves. In addition, purchasing a product is highly commercialised and encouraged through various medium, such as advertisement on television or internet. Owing to which an adolescent sense attraction towards these possessions.
Henceforth, it becomes necessary that this young generation should be taught the significance of diverting their energy to more productive hobbies, as there are several benefits associated with it. Firstly, these activities are source of self-awareness. The reason for this is that such undertakings gives a person time to realise potential of oneself. For example, adventure sports like hiking, cycling are intertwined with fitness and health. Secondly, innovative ideas are born when a person decides to spend time with oneself and does self-retrospection. To illustrate, a young age enthusiast realised his true caliber when he started to travel to different places on his own, and now this man is a famous entrepreneur.
In conclusion, Although shopping could lead to short-term happiness and satisfaction, it is a fact that young generation should be encouraged to develop other hobbies too because of the advantages it ensures for a healthy living.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55862068966 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13952214303 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644827586207 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6976589223 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.466666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.13333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25937827016 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070701284777 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669013209605 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162598831671 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624126780186 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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