Should the authorities from big cities around the world discourage citizens from using private cars and rather encourage them to use other means of transport such as bicycles, skates, the subway, etc.?
It is irrefutable to say, with the number of metropolitan increasing, the level of pollution in the city has rocketed than that of the previous decades. Question is whether, policy makers should encourage their citizen toward a healthy and better opt of transportation or encourage private vehicles. In this essay I will be discussing about the positive aspects of alternate transportation for metropolitans and deduce a conclusion based on that.
To begin with, migration local or global has made the city areas more crowded and is the high time to think of the means transportations to use, also because vehicles are the significant cause of pollution in metropolitan. However, known as less pollutant, healthy option and the saver of fuel, alternate transportations has myriad benefits to provide and necessity of the time. For instance, many European nations opt for the bicycles and an electric vehicle which has significantly reduces pollution in those counties making people healthier.
Second of all, one cannot forget the propitious alternate transport medium cause in the health of the citizen. For example, according to bbc uk the number of people suffering from respiratory diseases in last decade, after they have opted for electric transportation. This also has correlation to the decrease in the obesity of the people who now prefer walking or bicycle rather than private vehicles.
To recapitulate, it is the need of the era to discard vehicles with fossil fuel which is in the verge of extinction and opt for the healthy alternate of the transportation. Vehicles are known as the utmost means of pollution in colossal metropolitan, and encouraging to the alternate transportation is the best way to make people healthy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, second, so, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28776978417 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14650138886 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564748201439 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 26.2618725611 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 133.636363636 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2727272727 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13648885146 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519839122572 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454995508015 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0822535028986 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246504207773 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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