small shops in towns and villages are closing and are being replaced by big stores, do you think it is good or bd? explain your opinion with relevant examples.
Ever since the globalization took place. Commercialization has taken mammoth dimension. Consequently, there is mushroom growth of big malls. As every garden has weeds, this phenomenon also has certain merits and demerits. On the whole, pros outweigh cons.
To embark with, there are innumerable benefits of big shopping malls. Firstly, it saves time and energy. Masses do not have to waste time going one small shop to another. They can purchase everything under a roof in malls. Moreover, big stores offer collosal variety of products. To epitomize, one can buy anything ranging from a sewing needle to a car.
To fortify further, such stores buy items in bulk so they can afford to sell thing at lower price than the other small shops. Therefore, the customers are benefited. Apart from it, big malls sell branded products so the quality is assured. These items are long lasting. Last but not the least, big shopping centers accept debt and credit cards. Hence, folks need not to carry heavy chunks of cash along with them.
On the downside, big malls promote consumerism. They allure the people by attractive displays and schemes; which further paves way to use and throw culture. Eventually, it leads to environmental degradation. Additionally, such malls incur huge amount investment, therefore they can withstand adverse market conditions for long time. Because of this small shops and vendors find it difficult to cope with them.
to recapitulate, I pen down saying that big shopping malls are definitely an asset to consumers and society despite their drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, apart from, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17647058824 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73225567413 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.694117647059 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.3647294316 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 57.3913043478 106.682146367 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.0869565217 20.7667163134 53% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.39130434783 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13418803527 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0342413539554 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450015239576 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0689845038054 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305740542316 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 50.2224549098 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.58 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 9.78957915832 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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