Smoking is a major cause of serious illness and death throughout the world today. In the interest of the public health, governments should ban cigarettes and other tobacco products. DO you agree or disagree?
Being one of the significant contributors to multiple complicated diseases and death all around the globe, smoking and tobacco-derived products ought to be prohibited by authorities in for the sake of people’s health. I entirely agree with the previous statement, and this essay will discuss the reasons for my opinion.
On the one hand, smoking has been a fatal threat for public health since decades owing to the fact that it can lead to plenty of drastic complications in health, such as lung cancer and heart failure. Not only smokers are subjected to such hazardous impacts but people surrounding them can also get affected by what is so called negative smoking. For instance, my late grandfather used to be a heavy smoker, and he unfortunately died with lung cancer; moreover, my mother and two of her siblings are all asthmatic due to negative smoking. Thus, people can lose their lives and may influence the lives of their beloved ones if they are cigarettes consumers.
On the other hand, due to the previous argument, governments have to take some measures, completely banning smoking for example, in order to save more lives from such horrible destiny. Singapore, which banned smoking and tobacco in the year 2016, is now recording the lowest rates of death due to lung diseases around the world. That is to say, people are obliged to pay attention to their preferences when there are enacted laws that force them to.
To conclude, due to negatively affecting people’s health and longevity, it seems to me that decision makers should take the lead and impose proper actions against cigarettes and tobacco commodities by banning them from society.
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| 2019-10-05 | hany mohamed | 78 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, thus, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07608695652 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78499246853 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615942028986 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.9391624863 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.1 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157300628761 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594045415091 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516136279202 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0998879886212 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331023301107 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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