Smoking not only harms the smokers, but also those who are nearby. Therefore, smoking should be banned in public places.
To what extend do you agree or disagree?
The dimensions of smoking harms for both smokers and non-smokers around them has been brought into question. There is a dominant view among people that smoking must be prohibited in public area. This essay will discuss why restriction of smoking in the common places must be legislated.
The most important reason that is mentioned by smokers to defend smoking in public places is personal freedom. In other words, while they never voice their objection against the various disrobing issues originated from others, they expect non-smokers show reverence toward their right for smoking in any place that they want. The loud noise from children in parks could be considered as a tangible example that could be annoying for those people who came there to smoke in a silent atmosphere but they do not criticize about that. Therefore, smoker people know it as their legitimate right to smoke wherever they want, even though it could be disturbing for some other people.
However, issues regarding public health is a serious repercussion of smoking in public areas, and is not negotiable. In other words, whereas other problems that people may experience in public places, such as those who violate others calm by providing noise that should of course be curbed, smoking is a serious concern results in fatal diseases such as lungs cancer. Unfortunately, these likely disease not only threat those who smoke, but also those who are exposed to the smoke come from smoking. Thus, unless having strict restrictions on the places that people can smoke, it would be impossible to guarantee a hygienic lifestyle that is crucial in order to having prosperous residents.
In conclusion, smoking has hazardous outcomes for both smokers and non-smokers, and laws must hinder smokers in smoking at those places which are commonly used by ever one.
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- Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games.What are the positive and negative impacts of playing computer games? what can be done to minimize the bad effects? 67
- Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games.What are the positive and negative impacts of playing computer games? 67
- Smoking not only harms the smokers, but also those who are nearby. Therefore, smoking should be banned in public places.To what extend do you agree or disagree? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 27, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[3]
Message: You should probably use 'harm'.
Suggestion: harm
The dimensions of smoking harms for both smokers and non-smokers around...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, thus, whereas, while, in conclusion, of course, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17391304348 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5590901519 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57525083612 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3863362729 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.916666667 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309908525965 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126000116793 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588942834457 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189178443777 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059699455549 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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