Soem people think that the government should invest money in arts and cultural events, while others believe that the government should spend money on more important things. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Many people are of the opinion that it is the responsibility of the government to spend money on arts and cultural events. Where as a few others believe that the government should spend money on more important things . In this essay intend to discuss both these views and to pendown my opinion on the same.
Initially art and cultural events are the important aspects that raise the dignity of any nation. That is , the tradition and culture of any nation can be presented through their art forms. The appreciations and achievements gained through art and cultural events elevates the Fame of any nation around the world. Moreover , the unique art and cultural events of some nations are the key point of attraction for tourists. For instance , a number of foreigners are visiting India every year to enjoy the unique art forms such as bharathanatiyam , kathakali , mohiniyattam etc. So it is the responsibility of the government to preserve these art forms that brings up the Fame and dignity of the nation as well as to develop the tourism industry.
However , as many people argues that the government has the responsibility to spend money on other important factors such as education , healthcare , infrastructure , sanitation etc which are considered to be the basic amenities. Rather than funding on arts and culture , more priority should be given to these basic facilities without which people cannot survive. For example , underdeveloped countries like Africa and Korea can never claim themselves as developed nations since they lack the basic facilities for humans even if they have a rich cultural background. Thus it is the responsibility of the government to give more priority towards the basic facilities rather than spending bulk amount on art and culture.
To conclude , having considered both the views it seems sensible for me to raise my opinion that the government should give the first priority towards the development of basic infrastructure facilities than the art forms. Apart from this funding for art and cultural events can be done by multinational companies do that it will reduce the burden on government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, apart from, as to, for example, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1785.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14409221902 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93776890022 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472622478386 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9112705479 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1333333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348710598649 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137119780074 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12391676631 0.0667982634062 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261780247509 0.151304729494 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.175251881558 0.056905535591 308% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.