Some people think that the government should invest money in arts and cultural events, while others believe that the government should spend money on more important things. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Music festivals has become more and more popular in China. Many of them have been sponcered by the governments who hope to attract more tourists. While these activities have contributed the local economy, I hold that the governments should allowcate more funds on the public daily needs, such as education and health care.
Firstly, education is foundation of countries. Since countries development could not leave without a successful educational system. When people can be benefited by this system, they will have a strong willing to contribute their abilities to every asspects in the society. As a resutl, people can gain their self belonging from countries. For example, Singapore is the country which has invested numerous resources of education to citizens. Singapore citizens have pround of their country due to the best living and education environment.
Secondly, health care issues have become the priority mission for evey governments. This section requires not only about investment funds to improve the service qualities, but also more advanced new technologies to address human's diseases. Citizens' healthy conditions effect a long term benefit of countries, which including economic issues and environment problems. In China, cancer has become the no.1 killer of the population since the hopitals are lack of effective medicines. If the government can focus on this problem, it can save more patients.
Nevertheless, the arts and cultural events offer an opportunity to relax citizens' mind from the heavy presure life style. As a fact that a rock band concert can stimulate audiences' enthusiasm, to let them release their complains about the unhappy feeling among their life. Therefore, this is may be a good way to comfort those anger citiezens for the governments.
To sum up, the governments should allowcate more funds to those foundation departments, although the artistic events can release people's pressure from the daily life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 48, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
..., education is foundation of countries. Since countries development could not leave w...
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Line 3, column 540, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... best living and education environment. Secondly, health care issues have become...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46052631579 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8091951189 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621710526316 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.438674135 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2222222222 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05555555556 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12950577886 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0385001122884 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458932071047 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0819163998452 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573301312384 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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