Some people think to lower the maximum speed on all roads can make road saver ,some think there are another way. Discuss in both views and give your opinion.

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Some people think to lower the maximum speed on all roads can make road saver ,
some think there are another way. Discuss in both views and give your opinion.

Submitted by banike on Thu, 06/13/2019 - 08:37

Nowadays, over speed became one of the critical reasons in traffic accident. Some people believed that to lower the maximum speed on all roads could be beneficial for road safety, some others say there are a better way to keep road safe.

To begin, all the speed limit regulation should be regularly examined by the police department according to the crash and death rate on all the road. The speed limit should be reduced in certain areas. Especially in the CBD and the school zoon. During these areas, there are many pedestrians on the street, lower speed can make driver pay more attention on surrounding, they can make a quicker responding.

However, if the same top speed limit applied for all roads, it will damage the traffic efficiency. Different speed limit has their own capacity design for different types of roads. That is why moto way speed limit can up to 130km/h or even no limitation in Germen. Furthermore, driver’s behaviour should be considered as the road safety reason as well. People using mobile phone while driving the vehicle also caused many serious crash to death. Higher pulishment should be applied to this behaviour to reduce the traffic accident rate.

Besides, there are new technology for the driving assistant to keep road safe, such as auto break, self-drive system. Active safe driving tech has been involved into driver’s behavior more and more.

In conclusion, I would like to say that to lower speed limit can maximise the road safety in certain areas. At the same time, automatical driving innovation technologh also provide a better option to protect the pedestrians on the street without any impact to the traffice efficiency.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'limits'.
Suggestion: limits
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, however, if, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06810035842 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56597282604 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584229390681 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8693787083 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.375 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238958597951 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737618868575 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0943180194623 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145714078889 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106580292567 0.056905535591 187% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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